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 > "The simple graph has brought more information to the data analyst’s mind than any other device."---John Tukey
 
-Visualization makes data decipherable. Have you ever tried to study a table of raw data? You can examine a couple of values at a time, but you cannot attend to many values at once. The data overloads your attention span, which makes it hard to spot patterns in the data. See this for yourself; can you spot the striking relationship between $X$ and $Y$ in the table below?
+Visualization makes data decipherable. Consider what it is like to study a table of raw data. You can examine a couple of values at a time, but you cannot attend to many values at once. The data overloads your attention span, which makes it hard to spot patterns in the data. See this for yourself; can you spot the striking relationship between $X$ and $Y$ in the table below?
 
 ```{r data, echo=FALSE}
 x <- rep(seq(0.2, 1.8, length = 5), 2) + runif(10, -0.15, 0.15)